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on January 3, 2022
That fairy isn’t into vore, but the leech doesn’t seem to respect her choice. Bad leech!
Fairies vs Tentacles
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So it’s intelligent, just not a “High” level Intelligent. At the rate it’s evolving though, it should be conceptually more aware of what it’s doing. The question is, will that be a Good thing, or a Bad thing.
Actually, this was VERY clever idea. It secured hostage AND power source in one action.
That was a Tactical decision based on necessity. But it doesn’t communicate outside of what it’s going to do or what it’s done. And as Zak stated, it’s not connected to Network. So either it’s Incapable or hasn’t figured that out yet.
And if it Can, then thing’s get interesting.
Hey Eldrik, I’d like to suggest something, to make your dialogs a bit more “natural”. It’s not really concerning this page in particular though.
Your characters continually refer to their respective elements with the whole title, aka “you are an earth fairy” “I’m a fire fairy”. Considering this is probably the most defining difference between phenotypes in their society, and also all of them are fairys anyway, they would probably start shortening that in casual speech.
For example, in the US, very little people, outside of the written word or when giving speeches, actually say “African American”. They just use “black” and everyone knows what is meant. I imagine, that in your world, the fairys would probably start refering to each other in a similar way, just by their element. “Hey, you are nature, can you help her or what?!”. You are already sometimes doing that, for example fairies calling each other by the color, but MOST of the time, when they are using the whole “xyz fairy” thing, it seems a bit stilted :S
They do it sometime, calling a pink fairy a “pinky” or a nature fairy a “greeny”, it just doesn’t come out so often, mostly because character get names.
I’ve just now read through some chapters again… turns out I was wrong anyhow… They do use a LOT of shorthands like “earthy” or such as well.
I take back everything I said, and maintain the opposite. 😀